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Strangers come for the child

An excerpt from Chapter 5, Root, Book 1 of the Peacebringer Trilogy


FIRST DRAFT of a partial rewrite – to be revised and copyedited


Skopia tossed the mash in abrupt jerks. The chickens scrabbled for it, charging each other for the same bits of corn like there wasn’t plenty for them all to choke on. When Gunny pushed Mina aside a third time, Skopia booted the big white hen away. Gently, though she hankered to kick the devil out of something.

She shoved the cup back in the feed bin and took the egg basket off the hook. She had to leave the shelter of the wattle lean-to to get to the coop’s opening. If she had to build it again, she might do it differently. She hadn’t spent a lot of time planning–not that she could have thought straight so soon afterward–because she’d needed the steady sawing and chiseling and twining of withes to keep her hands busy.

And Ike brought one of them to the compound. Continue reading “Strangers come for the child”

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The Maggie Sullivan mysteries

Tough Cookie by M. Ruth Myers

I used to love watching old black-and-white movies from the 1930s and ’40s. The clothes were beautiful. The women were bright and witty.

Nearly every Saturday I’d go to town with my mother, where we’d visit the little hole-in-the-wall used bookstore. She’d stock up on Harlequins and I’d get new Nancy Drews, Dana Girls, and Judy Boltons. They cost 60 cents then. (Huh. I completed my series of Judy Boltons a few years ago, and the books cost $6 and up now.)

I enjoyed the older books the best. I always checked the copyright page on the Nancy Drews. The newer books just didn’t have any flavor.

What a delight it was when I finished reading M. Ruth Myers’ The Whiskey Tide on my Kindle and saw the promo chapter for No Game for a Dame. I think I read just one paragraph before I downloaded it.

Although I read mostly fantasy now, mystery was my first love. And I love the Maggie Sullivan mysteries. There’s all the atmosphere of period hardboiled detective novels but better. The heroine is smart, tough, and worldly-wise without being cynical, and she has friends among the other women in the boarding house where she lives.

Reading the Maggie Sullivan mysteries is like reading an old Judy Bolton. Myers doesn’t just use period language but also knows what the houses and streets and backyards look like. Really, it’s like reading a fantasy in that I’m pulled into a completely different world.

There are only three Maggie Sullivan mysteries so far: No Game for a Dame, Tough Cookie, Don’t Dare a Dame. I hope there will be many more!

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BFFs I finished reading in 2013

I read five big fat fantasy series this year! A few years ago I read the first books of a couple of big fat fantasy series, and this year I finally finished those two series, Greg Keyes’ Kingdoms of Thorn and Bone and Daniel Abraham’s Long Price Quartet. I also read Patty Jansen’s Icefire Trilogy and C. S. Friedman’s Magister Trilogy, and I’m going to count Lindsay Buroker’s Emperor’s Edge series even though I read most of those books in 2012.

I enjoyed the first book of Kingdoms of Thorn and Bone, The Briar King, and was really looking forward to the rest of the series. Uh oh. The next two books were pretty good too, but the final book was sheer WTFery. A major plot thread was abandoned, and the ending was rushed and inconclusive. I have no idea what happened. Did the author get tired of the book? Did he need more time? It’s really disappointing when a series crashes.

The Magister Trilogy ended on a disappointing note also. The first book raised a major question about the morality of fueling magic with people’s lives, and the subject was completely dropped at the end. Now that the protagonist was recognized as a mage (nothing unexpected there, huh?), everything was hunky dory. Maybe that was the point of the series — that the rules change when you’re the one with the power — but if so the point was extremely subtle, so subtle I’m more likely to believe the author forgot the question raised in the first book. Bah.

I enjoyed the Long Price Quartet much more than the other two I just mentioned. I had forgotten much of what happened in A Shadow in Summer (but I still remember all the seeds dropping loudly on the stone floor; that was a great scene full of sensory detail), but there was just enough recap that I was able to recall events and people. The author let his characters remain true to themselves; they weren’t pushed to change to conform to story needs, and they aged naturally in body and personality. It was sad that a certain army got whupped, but what else can you really expect from someone with no military background and untrained and unarmed recruits? And this series contains the morality missing in the Magister Trilogy.

The Icefire Trilogy was fun to read, and I had to download the next book immediately finishing the one previous. The trilogy had a mostly satisfying ending. The romance of the older couple was a little abrupt and struck a false note; their actions felt forced to fit the need for a happy ending. I also was disappointed not to see a reconciliation between the brothers. What!? After all that build-up of their past conflict? That’s what I wanted to see, not some obligatory romance.

The Emperor’s Edge comprises seven books, nine if you count Encrypted and Decrypted, which really are necessary to read to enjoy the ending. Normally I’m done with a story that drags out over more than four books. I don’t know if it’s because these books were released so close together or because they were so tightly focused and didn’t keep adding plotlines and characters, but I didn’t get that “Okay, we’re done now” feeling I get midway through a never-ending series. The author pulled off a couple of tough accomplishments: (1) She managed to rehabilitate the assassin without stretching him into something unbelievable. He was emotionally stunted and remains emotionally stunted. The protag is a fixer, just about OCD with her need to clean, and he became her project. Those two people together work. (2) The boy who’s a dreamer didn’t automagically become a decisive leader. I was really primed for that to happen — it does in all the other BFFs! — but nope, the leader turned out to be someone who actually knew how to lead.

All in all, 2013 was a good year for reading BFFs.

  • Greg Keyes, The Kingdoms of Thorn and Bone: The Briar King, The Charnel Prince, The Blood Knight, The Born Queen
  • C. S. Friedman, The Magister Trilogy: Feast of Souls, Wings of Wrath, Legacy of Kings
  • Daniel Abraham, The Long Price Quartet: A Shadow in Summer, A Betrayal in Winter, An Autumn War, The Price of Spring
  • Patty Jansen, The Icefire Trilogy: Fire & Ice, Dust & Rain, Blood & Tears
  • Lindsay Buroker, The Emperor’s Edge: The Emperor’s Edge, Dark Currents, Deadly Games, Conspiracy, Blood and Betrayal, Forged in Blood I & II, Encrypted, Decrypted

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The case of the missing next book

Several years ago (actually, eleven according to my LibraryThing catalog) I read a book I very much enjoyed. The setting felt fresh and I really, really wanted to read the next book in the series. A continuation never did show up at the public library, where I had gotten the first book, and eventually I forgot about it.

Then I saw an enticing book cover in the author’s signature line on a forum, clicked on it, and discovered it was the third book in the series I had wanted to read over a decade ago. Oh joy!

The first book, Children of the Shaman, was released here in the US, but apparently the second book, The Glass Mountain, was only released in the UK. 🙁 The third book, Malarat, just came out.

I’m still waiting for the second e-book to become available, but it should be out Real Soon Now on Kindle. The author, Jessica Rydill, is releasing the e-books herself, and the covers are striking.

The original cover

The original cover

The updated cover

The updated cover

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